Wednesday, July 23, 2008

I have the general idea for procedures involving Part 1 - "Preparations", with an excerpt from Chapter 2. Nothing much, but still something significant.

Part 1 - Preparations

Chapter 1 - Personal Entry
The story starts off with Mira and Fira in Jein-Tol after the Eight Ichorian War. Mira meets with Arshad's old comrade, Christopher, and the two start to seek out members from the original Circle of Twelve. Under orders from Christopher, he keeps his connection with Arshad a secret.

Meanwhile, Fira is rescued by Amanda and Altair from an Umajon holding site. Amanda introduces Fira to Arshad, who then leads her to join the group with 'uncertain plans'.


Chapter 2 - Uncertain Plans
Kyra and Nur make an entry here. This messes up some of Arshad's original plans, and he then tries to locate them.

EXCERPT:
The static hissed on silently between the screen and Arshad as he contemplated what Steven had just said. Arshad stared at the hooded figure on the screen - the one on the screen did the same back.

Arshad sighed. "Are you sure there was an error?"

"One hundred percent. Two foreign entities." Steven said. The static cackled.

Arshad pushed a button and turned it to try to make the static cease. All he did was make it worse. Groaning, he sat back onto his chair, head in his hand. "This is going to mess us up, Steve,"

The hooded figure looked over his shoulder. "I thought I told you not to call me Steve,"

"Yeah, well, we have worse things to worry about. We can't risk them getting captured by the Umajon. Do they have a Psi Index?"

Steven nodded. "One of them had a P.I. of over 8. That's enough to stimulate high level radiation."

Suddenly Arshad was all ears. He leaned forward. "And the other one?"

"The other had - wait for it - the other one had over 32."

Arshad nearly screamed. He slammed the table and pointed at the screen. "32 is enough to operate a weak Thor supercannon. Find them! They might not be able to handle the energies!!"

Steven was taken aback at this sudden burst. "We might be too late, Arshad," he said. "I lost a reading on the one with 32 the moment he or she entered the space-time system,"

Arshad only laughed. A Psi Index of 32 was far higher than any human - or alien- could even handle. The person probably propelled him or herself back into Old Earth - what, Crutaecious Era?

"I don't care, find the one with the 8 at least. I'm pretty sure it will be easy to find the 32. Just look for a spot where nothing's alive." Arshad said, finally calming down. "I want them here, with the Circle. If the Umajon find them first, our mission will be in jeapordy, and Old Earth might be in danger,"

The hooded figure hesitated, then said, "I thought I was the one giving orders," and blanked out.


Um... yeah, sort of crappy right now, but I'm working all I can on it. I may ask for a few ideas around over the week. Would someone care to help me comprehend this? ^^,


End.

.Arshad

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